Welcome to the Weekly Challenge Number One Hundred And Eighty-Two, where I post a topic and then challenge you to come up with a 100 word story based on that topic.
The topic this week was… was…. um…
It’s Crushed!
The excellent theme music is by Guy David.
I’d like to take a moment to that Guy David for having been a part of this podcast over the years. He’s let me know that this will be his last story. You’ve made my life that much more surreal, and I’ve come to embrace the principle that life’s too short to listen to bad music with your wisdom.
VOTING
No voting this week. Listen to the podcast for the reason why and leave a comment if you’d like to see it come back.
Go ahead and listen to them and then vote for your favorites (multiple selections are allowed):
Stephen
Before, there was screaming.
The screams were in my head. It was all too much. Keeping up the
house. Having the newest car. The stupid forms at work. Her
marathon shopping sprees. The kids deciding their new hobby was too
boring after we’d rearranged our schedules. Working twelve hour days
to afford it all.
Even the dog growled at me.
Then the bum bit me. Twelve hours later, and I’m infected like him.
It’s simple now. I hunger for human flesh, and I kill. And I eat.
The screams are outside my head now.
But my mind is at peace.
Lynda
I was told I might die.
Might.
Everyone dies, what’s the big deal? Not everyone finds peace. That thought scared me all the way to this mountain.
Forty minutes into the climb my muscles hurt so bad I almost believed everyone who told me I couldn’t do this, and I wanted to hate them but I was too busy. After my lungs stopped burning I started to feel hungry. Eventually that passed, too.
When I reached the top, an old man greeted me.
“What took you so long?”
Too tired to do anything but laugh, we sat watching the sunset.
Jeffrey 1
At the end of world war one, it was thought that peace for at least a life time was inevitable. There was no way that anyone would want to fight a war again after such carnage and destruction of the first world war, and so it was named the war to end all wars. Then the great depression happened, and countries struggled to make ends meet. When you have ten starving people in a room and there is only six sandwiches they are going to fight over them, and so we have world war two. They should have read history.
Jeffrey 2
You know what it is supposed to be like in church. Everyone is quite listening to the preacher, praying. If you are old enough to remember the days before Mass was in english, you probably say the rosary instead of listening. But, if you have little kids with you it is a totally different experience. You spend time getting them to be quiet, not play with the kneelers, not chew on the books, and not make airplanes out of the bulletin. When the sign of peace comes it means something totally different to you. Peace and quiet be with you.
Anima
I have seen many spectacular things; with my favored nephew these thoughts I share:
There are two things required of a friend:
The ability to laugh, and the ability to laugh at oneself.
There are four thoughts that oft occupy the mind, only three that I will share:
An ice cold drink after mowing the lawn, the commitment to reach the summit, and a tender kiss; that is enough.
And there are three things that man says, that are not taken seriously:
I come in peace;
Do you want a piece of me?
And Man, I really have to piss.
Justin
I have no idea how Major Ricks got his rank, because he’s a complete moron, dangerously so. He wont allow our sniper to relocate to counter the enemy sniper. I’ve lost five men because of this. The only sense I’ve ever seen in him is that he removed his rank insignias so the sniper wont know who he is the few times he’s in the open. Here he comes now crouched, and scowling like always. I tell him my thoughts of him. He stands, red faced. I also stand, then salute. His scowling face explodes. Rest in peace, Major Ricks.
JRadimus
The war began instantly. The fighting had been intense, the losses devastating. Across the battlefield, amongst the mangled weaponry and war machines, lay the bloody, dismembered corpses of the lucky, the maimed, moaning bodies of the unlucky, and the scattered pieces of the rest.
The aggressor was merciless. He ordered maneuvers without regard for his own casualties, only how much it would destroy his enemy. It was a carnal bloodlust.
Suddenly, the commander instantly ceased his rampage with as little warning as he had begun.
“Matthew, dinner!” the young warlord’s father called.
“Yes! Spaghetti!”
This peace would only be temporary.
Basrai
She likes the sound of it, but hesitates still. She knows her baby is coming; its head is lower, protruding into her pelvic bone, and causing discomfort. Still she hesitates. She turns her thought many times over inside her head, like choosing a pumpkin; but as soon as her decision was made, she again put it back, again indecisive.
She loves to name it Shanti, Sanskrit for Peace. But a name defines, insists. Shanti weighs, almost a burden. She vacillates until the delivery.
Now, as she caresses Shanti’s pink toes, she no longer fears, for tiny Shanti needs her protection.
Zacmann
Brad ran fast. Brad was terrified. Brad was being chased by big birds with snakelike heads. They wanted to eat him. He grabbed an ax and chopped the through a bird’s snakelike neck. Two heads grew back. Brad remembered that his neighbor from the UK said he always kept a torch in his workshop. It worked for Hercules Brad thought but only found a flashlight. Luckily, Brad soon found the snakebirds did not like light from LED bulbs in their eyes. The snakebirds returned to their space ship. Although Brad feared someday they might return, for now he had peace.
TJ
A hole in the ice is an eerie, uneasy peace. Silence echoes from distant hills and a vast new acoustic takes hold, at once outlandish yet familiar to North Country denizens. Is it evidence of an ice fisherman since headed on homeward with a string full of supper, or something more sinister … a brave yet foolhardy early season lake-walker … one less snowmobiler … a seaplane landing that ended badly. Is it mere open water, a lake not yet frozen over? Vital clues remain hidden by the freshly fallen snow: Namely, how many tracks lead there … and back?
Norval Joe
“You expect me to believe you want peace?” Amy spat at the old man.
Derrick walked around the chair where she sat, and stood in front of her. “You can believe it or stay locked in this room,” he said.
Dominick Lorrantelle smiled over his grandson’s shoulder. “Enough of that. There is more than your personal comfort at stake, here. There are many who seek freedom.”
She struggled in her bonds. “Freedom from you.” She glared.
“With domination will come peace,” he said and turned his back on her. “That is more freedom than most have enjoyed for many years.”
Guy David
Father Peace stood at the seaside mourning. “My children, why have you forsaken me” he whispered. An old sea captain swaggered to him and offered him a drink. “At my time, I have seen many a treasures” he said, “but the biggest treasure of all was friendship. I have seen much cruelty and misdeeds, but human nature always comes up on the right side at the end. Don’t weep for your children father peace, for peace is what they seek, and peace is what they would find.” With that, the sea captain went back to sea, looking for Father Time.
Planet Z
When I was young, the preacher said you won’t find peace in a saloon, a bottle of pills, in packs of cigarettes, at the end of a needle, between women’s legs, or all the filth Hollywood smears on the screen.
So, I drank. I popped pills. I smoke. I shot up heroin. I fucked every woman from Los Angeles to Boston and back again.
The preacher, he shouted and yelled and thumped his Bible and stayed up nights writing sermons till the day he died. Never a moment of peace.
Me, I’ve had a good ride. No regrets at all.
FWIW, I’m ambivalent about the poll at best. The only question I’d have is how you come up with next week’s topic after Halloween. Maybe using something like the random word generators?
You sound like a podcaster in need of a spa treatment! (so … you should probably go get one). :D
BIG HUG! Personally, I liked all the stories so I’d be another reason the poll didn’t work again this week because I’d vote for all of them and then well, jeez, that’s no help at all in trying to pick a winner, is it? :P It could be a race, the first one to come up with a story on the topic gets to pick the next one, and that would seem to be fair.
Incidentally, sorry to hear about Guy (bye Guy!) and I hope his computer someday once again lets him come back and play with us because he’s fun. :)
As for Saturday, Sunday, man as soon as this isn’t even remotely enjoyable kick us to the curb but /I’d/ miss it. *shrug* Your time is your own. I will say it’s easier for me to promo the weekly challenge like I did this week if it’s available Saturday ‘cuz that’s when I’m recording my podcast, but I’m back down to like 30 listeners a week (there was a surge, it was pleasant, it has ebbed) so I don’t know how much interest I’m throwing your way, and I don’t even do promos every week, either, so there’s that, too, but I do when I can, so … yay! :)
I don’t say it enough, I love this cast, I enjoy the stories and you all rock. Catch ya later, and peace out! :D
So you wanted comments. I will give you comments. How about this for a comment.
GUY DAVID COME BACK!!!!!!!
Wonderful stories this week except the ones by that Hite guy, I never know what he is talking about.
I like the Poll honestly because it is a quick an easy way to say, I like the stories, or I don’t like the stories, but like you I understand not having it. real feed back is nice. You could always have a secret council (maybe of cats) decide who the winner is every week to pick the follow weeks topic.
I will be interested to know how it goes, I will have to check back here often.
Who should win, it is hard to say, I enjoyed many of the stories this week. But I will vote only for GUY DAVID so that he will come back.
-Jeff
I’ll miss Guy David’s stories, I always enjoyed them. Best of luck in your future projects, Night Guy!
*raises a coffee*
And I love everyone’s stories like the glorious arrangement of word bouquets they are. It’s an honor to appear alongside all of you.
I think the voting is cool, but I wont complain if you don’t keep it.
I think you should keep writer topic submissions, maybe choose one at random each week.
I’m a competitive person who hates competing. Probably because I’m too lazy to become competitive enough to win.
I think that I enjoyed each of the stories this week, more than before, because I wasn’t comparing each to my own, deciding if I liked it better or worse than mine.
I would gladly continue each week without the poll. You could randomly pick one of the previous weeks entries out of a hat, roll the dice, use a random number generator. I never got the refrigerator magnet for the time I won, anyway.
I’ll raise a purple bunny to the naked detective myself, and wish Guy David all the luck, and return soon.
Philip/Norvaljoe
חשבתי עליך לעתים קרובות, guy…
i too am ambivalent about the poll, i just like writing snippets, which has totallly ruined me for other types of writing, except maybe postcards.
but how to select the next topic? hmmm. that is what makes this fun, that sometimes we get reasonable normal words, and sometimes you get a giant mish mash of ideas that your brain has to twister around. that’s what makes this project fun for me.
tj, lynda and guy’s stories particularly sparkled in my brain pan this week.
~az/am